Feedback on Presentation

Today we had our first presentation in the class. We had to create a powerpoint presentation on the subject we will study after the IFP. I was slightly nervous, but after looking at my exam results I was all pumped up. According to me overall I did well in the presentation but if I had to compare my presentation with the few of the other's, I would say my slides had a lot of text in them. Thus, it was a bit boring for the audience. Also, I was reading all the text out so, I could not maintain much eye contact with the audience though, my tutor felt I was good at maintaining eye contact. The tutor was happy with my presentation except for the few points I mentioned earlier. One of the main things for me was that I was around the time limit which is good because an incomplete presentation is never good.